Tuesday, February 17, 2009

Inverted story - Part 1

No guy can die before getting cheated. "Ur blabberings are endless. What a stupid creation by god" my mate’s common punch. My mind state was too abnormal that day, in a Palm park, under a palm tree. Really in a drunken mood. I counted four legs under every single palm tree. But I resembled palm tree. No beast next to me, as palm hasn’t got branches. Heard heavy breathings and pain screams from every tree except mine. Smell of flirtatiousness everywhere. I was thirsty. Rather I call it as gory. Yes I mean.

Guys are insane from girl’s sight. I know it’s absurd. "I really love you" is the most stinking lie I ever heard, if my wife pronounce it. Yes. Ana was totally cheating me. She lost her mom at 17. She was murdered by a man with a deranged mind. She was the costliest product of night market. Ana inhabits her mom's character I feared. It was so weird. Covertly speaking female. I hate flirts. And she was one of them. I loved her a lot as my mind induced me to believe her. It was my innocence. Rather my fucking stupidity.


My doubts on Ana was increasing. The same day, I saw Ana blending with Doctor next home. I unwillingly drenched her with blood. My costly dutch knife turned red. "Sorry Ana, I lost ma control" . " Ure insaiinee" She met her end. She shouldn’t have followed her mom. My terrible Nightmare. She can't be bad, I predicted.. cont.

12 comments:

Jinxed Pixie said...

ooh..morbid...

Twisted Elegance.... said...

Dei Yeanda ippadi koduramave yosikara?

Rattam paakama unnala irruka mudiyado?


:D

Vijayshryaln said...

@ Jinxed

Oh really?? i dint kno..... thanks. cheers..

Vijayshryaln said...

@ Twisted

Paru paru.. varum!!

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

good one..
looking forward to read next part..

Lion-ess said...

damn!!

Sophie said...

hmmm, good one... :)

Vijayshryaln said...

@ Mahesh
Welcome 2 most addictive area... Eeeeee.... Thanks dude..

Vijayshryaln said...

yea.. Damn bad woman!!!

Vijayshryaln said...

@ Sophie
:)

workhard said...

That is disturbing.. Im going to read the next part now...



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Vijayshryaln said...

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proceed proceed !!