Sunday, January 25, 2009

Love Addict 2

It was December's second week. My school's Annual day. I was preparing myself to speak to her, with wit. I counterfeited many proposal's style. But nothing seemed impressive. I could see coven inside the campus. But she stood like a horny horse, different. I may not be a colt. But, no despair in me. Coiled hair ends in her shoulder's beginning, like a derris(climbing plant). Dark roads with bends often, resembled her hair. I doubted how Indian flag got Saffron color before seeing her lips.

She 'll be beau even when she is compared with a poem wrote by thousand poets. I remember the day (Love addict 1), when i saw her near coaching class, in a rainy day. "Aval koondalum megamdan. Avvatrilirundum mazai thuligal sottuginranave" (Even her hair was like cloud, rain's dews dipping from it). I saw her face in every drop of rain, which fell in between us. Its not her eyes, which resembles flowers. Only flowers are like her eyes.

I was waiting for the cusp of us. And i got that. " Have u ever saw me??" me, asked irrelevantly by forgetting all rehearsals. "No, are we studying in same school??", she moved her saffron lips gently, though she stared at me many times like evergreen scoldings. I stepped back with a foolish smile. She passed me with a heaven locking smile. I know she never detested me. Absolutely an obfuscated evening.

Happy though my practices went in vain. I heard, "we'll forget everything in front of our love".

Catch ya frnds in next day of love addict ...... love life, life s love......

17 comments:

VJ Sophie said...

Love at first sight is easy to understand; it's when two people have been looking at each other for a lifetime that it becomes a miracle.

Vijayshryaln said...
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Vijayshryaln said...

Mmmm...Ur rit. But tat kinda love will not fetch u the happiness n heavenly feelings comparatively...... But well set love will b of ur side...

nil said...

we forget evrythng wen we are infrnt of our "the one".
agreed!! .. lol.
take care :)
cheerz!

Twisted Elegance.... said...

Yenda dei! Ithuve pozapa nee schoola vetchurundiya?

Celestial devil said...

Machan..Idu Etthanavadhu

Vijayshryaln said...

Ellam ore kuttaila uzunda mattadan. Idula no. ore keda??

Vijayshryaln said...

@ NIL

ya. xatly..... yu ever fogot yurself??? havin "the one"?? hope u felt those feelings...

Cheeearzz!! lolz..

Vijayshryaln said...

@ Twisted
Ne nalla padichi evlo mark vaangina.... karpanayum sambavamum... title epdi...

Onthewingsofadream said...

hehehee ...used to happen to me when i was in school ....

ah the innocence of love !!
good luck

Vijayshryaln said...

yup.....v do. so happy uh.... wre s treat???? :D

Entertainer said...

good one..u had the guts to go and say that atleast.. i dint have that either.. nyways it better to love and lost than not to have loved at all...

Rahul said...

hey...nice post...right from the heart..this is wat I call life !! :)
Have a good day. Am delighted to be adding you.

Vijayshryaln said...

@ Entertainer
Yup.... Life widout love will b like a soul-less human... let us live....

Vijayshryaln said...

@ Rahul

Thanx dude.... pleasure of love will sweep everyone... even u....;0

Som said...

well nice story you are developing but frankly the language used could have been better (read simpler !). It seems you tried too hard; try poetry ...

Vijayshryaln said...

@ som
V r bloggin just 2 do some thing which is not normal.. not a leave letter 2 write with words in ease.. lemme learn from others n try tellin few words.......