Sunday, February 22, 2009

Inverted stroy. Part - 2

The next day, I was at Palm park, under the same palm tree. But I could count four legs that time. Ana was there with me, engaged in same horny palm park's activity. I am no man from mars. Weeks passed. I feared my nightmares might turn true. She started freaking out with Doctor often. I was dumb seeing her with him. Couldn’t question her about her behavior. As i feared, Doctor took her to palm park, and she returned wet. Yes I mean.

Never joined my lid, that night. My eyes were spitting on my cheeks, thinking over her ill behavior. It was twelve noon when I got up the next day. Couldn’t move my hand, sprain I guess. “Wasn’t I sleeping?” I doubted.

I was disturbed mentally. I rushed to her room to warn her. Found her red and dead. She must be killed, by a man with a deranged mind. I wondered, seeing my shirt with bloodstains. Tried a lot to come out of my dream. Not a dream, i realized.
" Hey am no fucking insane"; " I wouldn't have tore her".
Her death was very similar to her mom's. " I hate her mom. but i know i didn't kill her".
Flashes...
Saw my (Dutch)knife next to my Ana. My nightmares were no more just nightmares.

18 comments:

Jinxed Pixie said...

shit mann...is morbidity the next blogger trend after guest posts???
not that i particularly mind it...
;)

Jinxed Pixie said...

n btw, i am blogrolling you... :)

Vijayshryaln said...

@ Jinxed
May b.... but i don think so....
n btw, thanx.. n do rock as ur doin, kiddo... cheeeerrzz!!

Twisted Elegance.... said...

Moral of Part two

1)Never sleep in the room next to this man's.

2) The woman who is going to be his wife please make sure you have no doctor friends

Vijayshryaln said...

@ Twisted
Its not that v doubt every 1... enyways, made me 2 smile very broadly wid dose 2 points!! ;)

Sophie said...

Made me smile too :)

Vijayshryaln said...

@ sophie
Good comment abt d post!!! liked it!!

Som said...

Now this is something really interesting; way better than love addict. The non linear sense of narration, fast ... good work !!

Vijayshryaln said...

@ som
He he.. i can feel d pain in yu.... that's all fake.... throw her outta yur heart.. Guys can njoy their life widout dem..

controlled chaos said...

At first I was soo confused...then I saw the title of your second post. THEN i saw the title of this post.

Anyways, interesting stuff you've got here. I found your blog randomly while browsing.

Vijayshryaln said...

@ chaos
thanx frnd!!!
n welcome !
confusion gone??? ;))

Celestial devil said...

I never thought for a moment that there is an 'anniyan' hiding inside you...Sham shaka sham seesa...Kolai pannuimbodhu edhavadhu mandram solluviya machan...

Vijayshryaln said...

aamanda!! mandaram sllitu mani aatitu varuven!!!

Onthewingsofadream said...

good one !! it kept me hooked ..

u have put a lot in it in small space ..the mother -daughter thing ...and the nightmare ...
very well written ...

i like dutch knives ..:-)

Vijayshryaln said...

Ooooof!!! thanx frnd.... am satisfied at least u read it carefully..... cheeerrrzzzz....

workhard said...

That is really twisted... The way u have written is really spooky...I like Twisted Elegance's review..Totally agree..

Write poetry

Vijayshryaln said...

ha ha.. lolzz..
thanx for being here frnd..

nancy said...

baby......watta verse man...i loved dis verse specifically. 'my eyes were spitting on my cheeks'...u rock babyyyyyyyyy mmmmuuuuuuuuuaaaaaaahhhhhhhh