She 'll be beau even when she is compared with a poem wrote by thousand poets. I remember the day (Love addict 1), when i saw her near coaching class, in a rainy day. "Aval koondalum megamdan. Avvatrilirundum mazai thuligal sottuginranave" (Even her hair was like cloud, rain's dews dipping from it). I saw her face in every drop of rain, which fell in between us. Its not her eyes, which resembles flowers. Only flowers are like her eyes.
I was waiting for the cusp of us. And i got that. " Have u ever saw me??" me, asked irrelevantly by forgetting all rehearsals. "No, are we studying in same school??", she moved her saffron lips gently, though she stared at me many times like evergreen scoldings. I stepped back with a foolish smile. She passed me with a heaven locking smile. I know she never detested me. Absolutely an obfuscated evening.
Happy though my practices went in vain. I heard, "we'll forget everything in front of our love".
Catch ya frnds in next day of love addict ...... love life, life s love......
17 comments:
Love at first sight is easy to understand; it's when two people have been looking at each other for a lifetime that it becomes a miracle.
Mmmm...Ur rit. But tat kinda love will not fetch u the happiness n heavenly feelings comparatively...... But well set love will b of ur side...
we forget evrythng wen we are infrnt of our "the one".
agreed!! .. lol.
take care :)
cheerz!
Yenda dei! Ithuve pozapa nee schoola vetchurundiya?
Machan..Idu Etthanavadhu
Ellam ore kuttaila uzunda mattadan. Idula no. ore keda??
@ NIL
ya. xatly..... yu ever fogot yurself??? havin "the one"?? hope u felt those feelings...
Cheeearzz!! lolz..
@ Twisted
Ne nalla padichi evlo mark vaangina.... karpanayum sambavamum... title epdi...
hehehee ...used to happen to me when i was in school ....
ah the innocence of love !!
good luck
yup.....v do. so happy uh.... wre s treat???? :D
good one..u had the guts to go and say that atleast.. i dint have that either.. nyways it better to love and lost than not to have loved at all...
hey...nice post...right from the heart..this is wat I call life !! :)
Have a good day. Am delighted to be adding you.
@ Entertainer
Yup.... Life widout love will b like a soul-less human... let us live....
@ Rahul
Thanx dude.... pleasure of love will sweep everyone... even u....;0
well nice story you are developing but frankly the language used could have been better (read simpler !). It seems you tried too hard; try poetry ...
@ som
V r bloggin just 2 do some thing which is not normal.. not a leave letter 2 write with words in ease.. lemme learn from others n try tellin few words.......
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