Thursday, April 2, 2009

My girl

She was in love with Me. Very badly. I had no other go, so I accepted. We mesmerized ourselves and felt the love’s essence to the root.

It was a fine noon. We planned to go for a drive in my car. We went in to deserted streets, greeny ways, and lovely areas. We both discussed a lot and we added, “I NEED TO TELL YOU ONE THING AT THIS TIME” to each other. I was surprised what she gonna tell. She wrote something in a piece of paper and pressed it in my hand. And now she wanted me to tell what I wished to. I pronounced, “I can’t be wid u sweetie. It’s time for me to leave you. Reason is my future, my home. Hope u’ll understand”, kissed her forehead wid tears. I was haggling her character for a while.


I was in hospital. I had no idea about how I went there. I came to know that we met with an accident, cuz of a lorry driver’s fault. I really couldn’t digest my sight. She was lying breathless, totally breathless, next bed. I know I loved her a lot. 

I saw my hands closed with the piece of paper, 
 “Dear, I’ll die if u leave me!! Love u jaanu!!!

33 comments:

srikanth said...

jannu a yar da athu :). . was nice da. but cudnt ve been a lil more elaborate. but still nice one

Celestial devil said...

Mams..plz post a sequel for this da..where did you first met her and stuff like that..!

Vijayshryaln said...

@ sri
thanx da... good 2 c ya here..

@ devil
met her in a rainy day under a tree.. wid a rainbow describing her smile..

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

awwwww........ so very touching it was bro.

Anonymous said...

sshort and crisp !! way i like them .. really nice :)

P said...

omg omg omg...
poor girl, poor you.. :P
and yes, a sequel, sir...

Vijayshryaln said...

@ preetilata
oh really!! love yu sis.... am happy tat it was a touchin 1 to ya...

Vijayshryaln said...

@ preetha
thankyu chubby!!

Vijayshryaln said...

@ kiddo
yea yea!! so poor.. help me na!!

workhard said...

i liked it, with being short, it leaves us with a lot of imagination and questions...

Haiku Poems

Enchanted Sophie said...

Tragic yet nice... me too waiting for sequel

Vijayshryaln said...

@ work hard
it does?? sweets.. n i sud thank u for showin me those haiku's. Lovely!

@ sophie
oh! so nice of yu frnd.
will track it soon.

workhard said...

im glad, i wanna learn them myself.. im really bad at poetry..
;-)

Vijayshryaln said...

@ work hard
Yu?? bad??
liar liar. ;)

workhard said...

Really i suck at poetry...I couldnt even write a title..

Vijayshryaln said...

ah! lemme help yu out..
P-O-E-T-R-Y
dis s wat i kno abt poetry!! ha ha..
cheerzz

Sruthisagar Yamunan said...

nancy ku drogam panrengala officer! very bad!

Vijayshryaln said...

dai don get bad words here. Nancy is ma sisternu how many times ive 2 tel ya..

Sakhi. said...

ur blog is gr8!!

Vijayshryaln said...

@ blue
Ah! tankuu. u lil kid can set a trend.. claps.

PhilO♥ said...

Oh My God! I'm numb. Seriously. Speechless!
It's just so...so sad. So dead! It's not true na ?? You have a great blog by the way :D

Vijayshryaln said...

@ cursed
oh! ur gr8 in expressing urself n ur feelings.. thanks for being here yaar... happy wid ya words..

Intern said...

this is no real tale right??
it was luveley, short, yet nice :)

nil said...

aww :)

Im back on blogger .. Updated my blog.
check it out, and i'll c u there! :))

Lovely post.

Vijayshryaln said...

@ shimmer
thanx n welcome frnd!

@ nil
oh. u remember my blog address 2?

Iti said...

ummmm.....I dunno if its for real or a part of your imagination. But it sure is touching and sad...


Take care.Stay happy.

Vijayshryaln said...

Of course. I added moi imagination to ma own story. ;) tanx frnd
tc 2.

Deepika said...

twas touching

Vijayshryaln said...

@ Deepika

U mean.

Pavitra said...

hey...i loved it....!!
Cute post...!

Vijayshryaln said...

@ pavi heyya thankkyyaaa!! happy 2 get yu here... wishes!

Esther said...

Love this one!

Vijayshryaln said...

thanks yaar!! happy happy 2 hear...