It was a fine noon. We planned to go for a drive in my car. We went in to deserted streets, greeny ways, and lovely areas. We both discussed a lot and we added, “I NEED TO TELL YOU ONE THING AT THIS TIME” to each other. I was surprised what she gonna tell. She wrote something in a piece of paper and pressed it in my hand. And now she wanted me to tell what I wished to. I pronounced, “I can’t be wid u sweetie. It’s time for me to leave you. Reason is my future, my home. Hope u’ll understand”, kissed her forehead wid tears. I was haggling her character for a while.
I was in hospital. I had no idea about how I went there. I came to know that we met with an accident, cuz of a lorry driver’s fault. I really couldn’t digest my sight. She was lying breathless, totally breathless, next bed. I know I loved her a lot.
I saw my hands closed with the piece of paper,
“Dear, I’ll die if u leave me!! Love u jaanu!!!”
33 comments:
jannu a yar da athu :). . was nice da. but cudnt ve been a lil more elaborate. but still nice one
Mams..plz post a sequel for this da..where did you first met her and stuff like that..!
@ sri
thanx da... good 2 c ya here..
@ devil
met her in a rainy day under a tree.. wid a rainbow describing her smile..
awwwww........ so very touching it was bro.
sshort and crisp !! way i like them .. really nice :)
omg omg omg...
poor girl, poor you.. :P
and yes, a sequel, sir...
@ preetilata
oh really!! love yu sis.... am happy tat it was a touchin 1 to ya...
@ preetha
thankyu chubby!!
@ kiddo
yea yea!! so poor.. help me na!!
i liked it, with being short, it leaves us with a lot of imagination and questions...
Haiku Poems
Tragic yet nice... me too waiting for sequel
@ work hard
it does?? sweets.. n i sud thank u for showin me those haiku's. Lovely!
@ sophie
oh! so nice of yu frnd.
will track it soon.
im glad, i wanna learn them myself.. im really bad at poetry..
;-)
@ work hard
Yu?? bad??
liar liar. ;)
Really i suck at poetry...I couldnt even write a title..
ah! lemme help yu out..
P-O-E-T-R-Y
dis s wat i kno abt poetry!! ha ha..
cheerzz
nancy ku drogam panrengala officer! very bad!
dai don get bad words here. Nancy is ma sisternu how many times ive 2 tel ya..
ur blog is gr8!!
@ blue
Ah! tankuu. u lil kid can set a trend.. claps.
Oh My God! I'm numb. Seriously. Speechless!
It's just so...so sad. So dead! It's not true na ?? You have a great blog by the way :D
@ cursed
oh! ur gr8 in expressing urself n ur feelings.. thanks for being here yaar... happy wid ya words..
this is no real tale right??
it was luveley, short, yet nice :)
aww :)
Im back on blogger .. Updated my blog.
check it out, and i'll c u there! :))
Lovely post.
@ shimmer
thanx n welcome frnd!
@ nil
oh. u remember my blog address 2?
ummmm.....I dunno if its for real or a part of your imagination. But it sure is touching and sad...
Take care.Stay happy.
Of course. I added moi imagination to ma own story. ;) tanx frnd
tc 2.
twas touching
@ Deepika
U mean.
hey...i loved it....!!
Cute post...!
@ pavi heyya thankkyyaaa!! happy 2 get yu here... wishes!
Love this one!
thanks yaar!! happy happy 2 hear...
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