Thursday, August 13, 2009

Cannibal


Orange sun, moist less cool breeze;
I heard Tabla's beautiful pitch!
I was hauled out. Rather i was scurried to lawn.


Mist drops on every rose;
I easily figured out that, they are trying to imitate my girl's lips.
Detached few roses from its stem and i was holding one.

Desire to lick it, and i did it with ease;
Shouldn't I tell you that it was not so tasty as her's?
Gradually i started eating rose feathers and I finished it in core fun.

My mind said with heavy knock, " UR A CANNIBAL VIJAY. Ate a rose?"
" Couldn't see a rose as a rose. Its just a clone of my GIRL " .




I cant compare a rose with my girl when they are imitating her. I can only compare roses with my girl !! Feel the difference!

14 comments:

Celestial devil said...

Machi..Sema feelings da;)Kavidhai kavidhai:D

Vijayshryaln said...

;) thanks mama... 'll tel ya more of dat in person.. winking!!

•◘•bLue-eYed souL•◘• said...

cute one....keep writting:)

Vijayshryaln said...

thanx u blue.... sweet of ya..

srikanth said...

geth:) roses r sweet indeed :)

Cursed♪♫ said...

This is so sweet. Loved the first line :)
You write well!
Keep it up!

Vijayshryaln said...

@Srikanth
sweet of course..... like how u think about ur GF....

@Cursed
Really?? Good 2 hear from ya....

VJ Sophie said...

nice!

Vijayshryaln said...

@ sof
;) all i can say is, tanx yaar....

Rane (The Orchid with All Shades Pink) said...

awwwwwwwweee lovely..intense..and beautiful..

your girl is lucky to have ya

Rane

Vijayshryaln said...

@ Rane
welcum rane... happy 2 c yu happy over here... hugggss

Sydney said...

is my head in the gutter - this poem (esp the third paragraph) seems really inappropriate haha

:)

Vijayshryaln said...

@ sydney
apppi? come again yo

nancy said...

hey baby........ u becoming a big writer..congrats honey....lovely lines.......